I'm trying something new, as I'm deep into edits of two Kpop Romance books. While those books will take a while to be published, I will share this new story with you. Never before have I shared an entire novel this way. Before, I would add the odd Teaser Tuesday, but most of those never got published. So instead of publishing this straight away, I shall share a chapter every week on Sunday with you.
This is scary since I'm a pantser, and usually, my betas are the ones who make sense of certain aspects of my storylines. However, I like instant gratification, and maybe, receiving feedback from readers, or the casual reader, will be fun. Most of you who email me do it because you love my characters. So I think in that respect, I'll be safe… but now watch me jinx myself. XD
So I guess, without further introduction, here's the first installment of Prosa Oratia. I hope you enjoy it.
An eternity in the rain
YA story
Marilyn Almodóvar
Chapter One
Paddington
I watched him lean closer to the door
frame, a questioning look in his eyes. My hand reached for the door, and I
closed it before standing opposite him. Haru
had gotten a lot taller over the summer, and it was clear that something had
changed in the way he was carrying himself around. He’d always had a stylish walk
due to his years’ training as a ballet dancer. He was also a wide receiver for our
football team and was the pitcher for our baseball team. The name Haru Oh was
well known in our school and most schools in our county.
“Were you busy?” He asked sheepishly,
knowing that this was when I usually spent reading in my room or writing.
“Not really,” I lied as he cocked
his head to the side and offered me one of those smiles that made his whole
face light up.
“Liar,” he chuckled and then looked
around. “Are your brothers here?”
“No, they’re still up at the farm.
They’re coming back tomorrow with my dad.” I replied as I pointed to the porch
swing.
Once we sat down, like we’d done
countless times before, he stretched his long legs while mine dangled beside
them.
“So, how was Seoul?”
“So, how was the coast?”
We both asked at the same time.
“You go first,” I said with a smile
and then ran a hand through my unruly curls. “I want to know all about Seoul.”
“It was good. My family is doing
great, and of course, once it was time to come back, everyone cried.” He said,
nodding, but I could see there was something he wasn’t telling me. His eyes
darkened for a moment, and then he turned up the charm. It wasn’t hard to see why
most girls in our school had the hots for him. Including me, though I didn’t
think we would ever be closing that friendship line. “So, how was the coast?
Did you get to surf?”
“It was good but short-lived, cause
my grandma fell, so we had to go to the farm. My mom and I just got back this
week. Aunt Gladys and Uncle Mateo are arriving tomorrow, and they’re staying
until January, so my dad doesn’t have to worry too much about spending time
there.”
“But she’s okay, right? Your gran?”
“Yes, she’s a feisty gal, as my
granddad says,” I told him and then nodded.
“Ah, well, that’s really good.”
“Yeah, and she got really irritated
with us… I mean, she’s so used to doing everything for us, she didn’t like
being waited on.”
“Really? I would totally have you
all at my beck and call.”
“You did already. No, thank you.”
“That was six years ago. I was ten.”
He said with a chuckle. “And you didn’t even help that much. You refused to do
things for me when you saw the bell.”
“Yes, oh, I’d forgotten the bell.”
“Haru.” My mother called as she came
up the steps and stopped to look at us on the porch.
Haru stood up immediately and then
smiled, bowing his head slightly. “Hi, Mrs. Salazar.”
“When did you get back?”
“Oh, we arrived last night. My mom
said she’ll call you tomorrow morning.”
“Oh, good, I’ve missed her. I just
got pizza. Did you eat?”
“I did, thank you.”
“All right, well, there’s plenty
because I bought food as if my whole army was here.” She shook her head and
then gave me a knowing look before walking into the house.
“What was that about?”
“She’s upset cause I broke up with
Terry.”
“Oh? And you didn’t think your best
friend should know about this?”
“You weren’t here, and I didn’t
want to text you about this. I talked to Magdalena.” I said, offering him a
grin.
“I bet she loved that.”
“Oh, yes, she totally thinks she’s
replaced you as my bestie.”
“Lies,” Haru said, leaning closer
once he’d sat back down beside me. “No one can replace me.”
“Of course not. Who else knows the
exact time that I was born?” I asked, and he nodded again, his face inches from
mine.
“Only someone who was born on the
same day, ten minutes before you.”
“Oh, gross, that makes you both
sound like you’re twins,” Magdalena said loudly from the steps as Haru pulled
away from me so fast, he hit the back of his head against the metal of the
swing.
“You should wear a bell,” Haru said
through gritted teeth as I coughed to stop myself from laughing.
“I brought that book you want to
read.”
“What book?”
“Some old witches series by Anne
Rice. My mom has the whole collection.” Magdalena walked the rest of the way
toward us and then handed me the book. “She also said that if you want
something else after this, you can just swing by the house and pick yourself.”
“Well, I’ll probably like this, so
I would love to read the entire series.”
“Noted,” Magdalena said as a smirk
settled on her features, and her eyes returned to Haru. “So, were you going to
text me?” She asked, turning on her charms as her dark eyes fixed on Haru.
“Why?” Haru asked with a shrug.
“Well, I thought you promised to
think about my proposition.” She pouted the same way that she did around the
other jocks.
“Wait, what are you talking about?
What preposition?” I asked with a frown.
“I gave you an answer,” Haru said, standing
up, towering over Magdalena’s lithe frame.
“Well, I thought that you just
needed a change of scenery.” She purred as Haru rolled his eyes.
“I’ll text you later.” He said,
nodding my way before he looked at Magdalena. “Lena.” He said, walking to the
stairs.
“Sure,” I replied before hitting
Magdalena’s shoulder with my hand. “What are you up to?”
“It’s clear that he’s into you.
Making him uncomfortable by hitting on him will hopefully speed his confession.”
“You’ve been watching way too many
k-dramas.” I shook my head as my mom opened the front door.
“Hey Lena, did you eat? Oh, did
Haru leave?” Mom asked as I nodded, and Lena shook her head. “Well, come on in,
we have tons of pizza.”
“Thanks, Auntie Ella,” Magdalena
said as my mom disappeared inside the house. “So, what do you think about my
proposition?”
“It’s going to blow up in your face,”
I told her. “He’s not interested, not in me… not in that way. We’ve known each
other since birth.”
“That’s just so gross. You two need
to stop saying that. I swear, even with him looking extremely Korean and you
looking extremely non-Korean, people will totally believe you’re twins.”
“That’s ridiculous,” I said, standing
up as Magdalena linked her arm with mine.
“No, what is ridiculous is that you
two are crushing on each other, but continue to say that you’re just friends.”
She said as I stopped in front of the closed door.
“Even if that were the case, I
couldn’t,” I told her sincerely. “I couldn’t lose Haru, and that’s what happens
when best friends date.”
“Bullshit, and you know it. Your
parents were best friends, who fell in love and married. And are still married.
So don’t give me that lame answer.” She said, pushing the door open and walking
through it as I took a deep breath in.
It was impossible to deny it
because Magdalena knew me well. But I didn’t want to admit that I would totally
disregard everything if Haru asked me out and just say yes.
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